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Haiku Diary

 Revelation
  Time is consciousness
Flowing through tributaries
Of a breathing soul Mystery We have journeyed far
Yet the stars hold dark secrets
Of unvanquished space  Twilight
  Hushed tones of sunset
Angelically suffusing
A surreal world   Seascape
  Turbulent waves roll
Carrying provisions
For winged predators

   Whitney's Eyes
  Rain storms reflected
Lightening and thunder too
In crystalline pools    Summer Hymn
  Soothing summer breeze
Caresses sun kissed landscape
Birds fly home to roost Untitled Celebrating life
Fish somersault
Trapping a glint of the sun Exquisite brush strokes
Setting sun’s liquefied gold
Sets landscape aglow 
— leonard daranjo, Jun 12, 2008

Critiques

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poewriter58

18 years ago

Leonard

These are the most perfect examples of Haiku/Senryu that I have seen. Beautifully thought out and worded Chrystalie
LD

leonard daranjo

18 years ago

Hi Chrystalie

Thank you Chrystalie. I deeply appreciate your reading and commenting. Take care ... Leonard
themoonman

themoonman

18 years ago

Leonard...

my hat is off to you sir.. well done! enjoyed the read and thank you for posting this... Richard
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rider68

18 years ago

Brilliant Great Examples

This is really great stuff/writings/thoughts/ Haiku/Senryu, I have to say Leonard i really enjoy reading your work, Very best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
LD

leonard daranjo

18 years ago

Hi Peter

Thanks a million Peter. Your comments are absolutely uplifting. Take Care ... Leonard

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