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Jun 12, 2008
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Soulful
Sitting atop
the core of
the earth's being
not still...just appearing
as such
depths immeasurable
by the naked eye...I swallow
your imagination in
cryptic messages
mixed with strong emotion.
Abysmal...enveloping your
every dream...pushing with
the tide of these feelings
esoteric illustrations
indistinguishable
to the outsider
clear in the view
of the diver
daring enough to...delve into
this sea
and float along...the gulf of
my existence.
Intense the domination
of the will to my
sway...stay submerged
in my ocean of profound
beauty...hidden beneath
the reflection of the heavens
on my surface.
Mastery of mystique
vast in jurisdiction
of dominion...waves crashing
into rippling pools
of synergy...made to
last forever...cascading down
over rocky hills
landing always back from whence
we came...water for life
waiting to give life
to you.
the core of
the earth's being
not still...just appearing
as such
depths immeasurable
by the naked eye...I swallow
your imagination in
cryptic messages
mixed with strong emotion.
Abysmal...enveloping your
every dream...pushing with
the tide of these feelings
esoteric illustrations
indistinguishable
to the outsider
clear in the view
of the diver
daring enough to...delve into
this sea
and float along...the gulf of
my existence.
Intense the domination
of the will to my
sway...stay submerged
in my ocean of profound
beauty...hidden beneath
the reflection of the heavens
on my surface.
Mastery of mystique
vast in jurisdiction
of dominion...waves crashing
into rippling pools
of synergy...made to
last forever...cascading down
over rocky hills
landing always back from whence
we came...water for life
waiting to give life
to you.
— Catalina, Jun 12, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years ago
Hi, Catalina
Catalina
18 years ago
I am appreciating the
poewriter58
18 years ago
Catalina
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Like the
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
Nice!
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