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Jun 18, 2008
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Village Vignettes
Sunrise to sunset
Villagers work paddy fields
Smell of upturned soil
Matted foliage
Tumbling out of tree tops
Reddish brown patches
After a harvest
Birds enjoy rich pickings
Open paddy fields
Villagers work paddy fields
Smell of upturned soil
Matted foliage
Tumbling out of tree tops
Reddish brown patches
After a harvest
Birds enjoy rich pickings
Open paddy fields
— leonard daranjo, Jun 18, 2008
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rider68
17 years 12 months ago
Form and Subject very spiritual
leonard daranjo
17 years 11 months ago
Hi Peter
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