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leonard daranjo
Jun 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A River's Nirvana

rivers feed oceans
and the oceans in return
emancipate them
— leonard daranjo, Jun 25, 2008
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Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Leonard

Excellent write. So much in so few words! Rett: It may look easy, when you look at me, But it took years of effort, to become the mess that you see John Fogerty
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rider68

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Leonard

Good to see you posting again, I can only agree with Rett, so much said, with such few words, Keep well........ Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
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leonard daranjo

17 years 11 months ago

Thank you Peter

I feel absolutely encouraged by your reading and commenting on my poems. Take care ... Leonard
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Synchro

17 years 11 months ago

Since you visited mine

I am enjoying your poems....hope we get a chance to discuss them in greater detail some time. You're a fun fellow. Yours in peace, (Cynthia McKinney for president) Synchro

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