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The Reason I Chose You

    This is a poem from a friend.  She wanted opinions on it.


As I sit here watching you sleep,
I'm reminded of your sweetness
and the reason I chose you. Your
small innocent wonder of life, had
me spell bound from the first.
Loyalty, honest, take no crap from
anybody attitude, mesmerized me.
I knew even before I knew I knew
that you were my new refreshing
life.  A change of pace that was
quite welcome one that was badly
needed, if my life was to continue.

Oh, yes you were quite a challenge
in the beginning.  Because of your
reservations about the oppression
you had received all your life I had to
earn your assurance of my trustworth-
iness.  I had to prove that I am not like
everybody else.  I hope I can continue
to prove that my one conviction is to
persuade you of my sincereness,
to be undivided in giving you my
genuine unabridged self.  Because
 if there is one thing I do well, it's that
I stick to my commitments once they
are made, unless I have reason.

— Pixee, Jun 28, 2008

Critiques

Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

Pixee

Have your friend come join us here and post!!
Pixee

Pixee

17 years 2 months ago

Sorry it has taken me so long to reply

She isn't much of a writer plus she is to busy going to school on line. Once in a great while she will write and she wants me to post so I do. I hope she will write more often. She can really right when she puts her mind to it. So sorry for the delay. Take care of YOU!! Your Friend, Pixee

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