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georgeianxu
Jul 05, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Felt So Clean


I felt so clean And wanting And willing To let all go Into wind Drifting out I felt so clean And ready And able To let you know I was here Holding on I felt so clean And sure of And cured of My old ghost gusts In the wind Closing in I felt so clean And revived And survived In your sweet eyes In your smile Taking off.
— georgeianxu, Jul 05, 2008

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Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

georgianxu

I rather liked it. it was short, well said and a clear meaning. Very well done. Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill

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