SHE LOVES ME...

I like the way the poem pulled me through. I had one stumble around: ---------------------------- Yes, it was true the letter on the screen was "E". She was calling him in full danger of getting caught. And she did get caught with all the dire consequences. --------------------------------- I'm unclear of the meaning behind the first three (3) lines and the last four (4) lines allude to a consequence that is never explained. For the first three (3) lines I might add a fourth that explains the significance of them. For the last four (4) I might add a fifth and sixth that do not fully detail the consequences but give the reader a better feel of what price was paid. All in all though I have to say this is a good poem. Over the last few months I have seen your work progress in depth to match the emotion you must be feeling. I look forward to reading your work each time if only because you and I write in disparate styles with, if I may be presumptuous, a similar goal of capturing an emotional snapshot and relating it to the reader. Again well done, thanks for bright spot this Monday morning. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)