Neopoet

Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

ML
Michael Landau
Jul 07, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Attacked By Tomatoes

Attacked by tomatoesI should have hadPotatoes Next timeI think I'll passNow, I'm passing gas 
Hours crapingLike a gorillaAt least I don't haveSalmonella It’s my favorite sauceBut, is it worth the cost?
— Michael Landau, Jul 07, 2008
More from this author

Critiques

Mark

Mark

17 years 11 months ago

lol

good one Michael ! Mark
Nilmini

Nilmini

17 years 11 months ago

Oh poor you!

I'm so sorry for you, my poor friend. You should have avoided tomatoes, if you'd known that it's bad for you. Oh my, another friend of mine has got Gas problem now! First, Jess got it & now you :-) Nice work. Cheers, Nilmini
ML

Michael Landau

17 years 11 months ago

Thanks Nilmini!

Thanks Nilmini, I'm glad you like it. They don't always give me a problem, only sometimes. I guess I always hope that next time I will be able to get away with it. Michael
P

poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Michael

What can I say other than it is funny you managed to make light of something painful at times great eye catching title here you leave the reader not knowing what or why Chrys

Join Neopoet to leave a critique

Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.

Join free Log in