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leonard daranjo
Jul 09, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Acrostic Poem

Enkindling a flame ofNascent powerLighting a lampIn total darknessGathering power throughHolistic thinkingTurning darkness into lightEmancipating the inner self fromNon essential cravingsMerging with the divine power  toExperience that which hasNever been experienced before – beyondThe touch of time 
— leonard daranjo, Jul 09, 2008
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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Acrostics

To be honest, I'm not the best person to review an acrostic, as they have never been a favorite of mine. You seem to have done a fair job, though, Leonard. Will leave the technical aspects to someone with more acrostic experience! Best, ~ Ronda

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