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Aug 04, 2011
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station to station
here by the phone
to hear you
across the waves
the static hisses
like team
like atmospheres seperate
we are islands
lonely in love
falling like wishs
stars diving
in the night
sweet pearl
how I haunt you
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
13 years 11 months ago
uncertian
not sure what "team" means here
steam....maybe
like the word team though
its so close to term
terms of team
terminating
terminus terminations
whom knows
its been a week like this
and I love it
...
pleiades
13 years 11 months ago
"lonely in love"
"lonely in love"
are we ever really
lonely in love?
even love across the waves...
the emotion itself,
tends to togetherness
INTERCHANGE involves ~
i do think steam fits better than team,
but maybe team, is what is meant to be
falling like wishes
stars diving
in the night
beautiful thoughts...
your writing
always takes me away
p
Esker
13 years 11 months ago
NEW INTERCHANGE
love this word structured and meaning like instruments for the minds travel
nothing like a good compass a blunderbuss and a mermaid Oh and some
imbibeing elexirs and of course I do know qaulity and finesse And theres
no harm in a slap from a slippery svelte fin!!
Esker
13 years 11 months ago
in regards
spinning out
wandering what my wonder is
and writing still
whil I jar my world
one thing that may be beautiful
is the talent for the poet is always
as a fallible thing
wish I was beautiful as the works
thats why its a gift
thank you for your comments
Hooded Stranger
13 years 11 months ago
Esker
Esker,
this really won't do, you've spelt the title correctly!!
How about:
Stayshone to stayshone?
LOL!
HS
Esker
13 years 11 months ago
One moment of weakness
yes indeed
a blunder!! ha ha
I think Knotted made it in there too
I just dont like search engines
they will improve for sure
words are fun though I just threw out a
dictionary taking up too much table space
and my glasses are busted until I get
new store boughts again