station to station

here by the phone
to hear you
across the waves
the static hisses
like team
like atmospheres seperate

we are islands

lonely in love
falling like wishs
stars diving
in the night

sweet pearl
how I haunt you

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

Esker

13 years 11 months ago

uncertian

not sure what "team" means here
steam....maybe
like the word team though
its so close to term
terms of team
terminating
terminus terminations

whom knows
its been a week like this
and I love it

...

pleiades

13 years 11 months ago

"lonely in love"

are we ever really
lonely in love?
even love across the waves...

the emotion itself,
tends to togetherness

INTERCHANGE involves ~

i do think steam fits better than team,
but maybe team, is what is meant to be

falling like wishes
stars diving
in the night

beautiful thoughts...

your writing
always takes me away

Esker

13 years 11 months ago

love this word structured and meaning like instruments for the minds travel
nothing like a good compass a blunderbuss and a mermaid Oh and some
imbibeing elexirs and of course I do know qaulity and finesse And theres
no harm in a slap from a slippery svelte fin!!