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Certain "Givens"

There are certain "givens", in life.
Price-tags that I must pay,
with varying monetary degrees;
trades that I must make.

With options that I need to barter, for:
to help adhere the word "comfortable", to the phrase, "my future".
I truly understand this principal; but, I'm not too happy about it...
..but, all that's part of the bargain, that's called, "Life".

Of late, these certain "givens"
have all seemed to increase their price-tags,
but, their intrinsic value, has remained the same, or dropped !
And most of the trades I've had to make,

have increased the echo in my wallet, as well.
Plus, either my bartering skills are slipping away,
or just about everyone else has made a pact with the Devil
and unfairly increased their chances, in the bargain called, "Life".

Consequently...given these," new and improved" "givens",
and the price-tags associated with said "givens",
not to mention the collective cruelty of their values,
I find myself wondering about the possibilities of option shop-lifting !

No
...I have yet to make a "pact" with the Devil, although it's being considered.
but, the rules have changed, considerably;
and I'm one of those "dogs", that are too old to learn new tricks, with any proficiency!
So I'm beginning to see less, and less value, in the bargain, that's called "Life". 



 

— docmaverick, Jul 14, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Edevold

Edevold

17 years 11 months ago

I like this poem

Hi, I like this poem. Not to be at all critical but, "although it's being considered" seems to contradict the previous emphatic "No" Keep venting, It's supposed to be good for you.
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 11 months ago

Hey, Edevoid...

....I appreciated the Time that you took to leave me the comment. As for the emphatic, "No"...it was meant for the previous line. I'm not sure why the site put it by itself, that's not where I typed it. At any rate, I probably SHOULD have been more clear. Thanks, again for the comment. Regards, doc.

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