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Jul 14, 2008
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a bug in beak
according to
my swallow friend,
a cherished max-
im of her kind
says bug in beak's
worth more (at least!)
than two fast lodged
in streamside bush
— barbsdad2003, Jul 14, 2008
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Ashfae
17 years 11 months ago
Touche. ;)
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