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Jul 18, 2008
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IN THE GREAT HALL
IN THE GREAT HALL I wandered to the portals of a great hall On the entrance arc, was carved an inscription Depicting courage, fame, noble actions, all A two line axiom of perfection ‘Peak of physical expression is in beauty’ Down the hallway, a revolving reflective door appeared ‘The intellect expresses self in poetic bounty’ And the shadows of misguided self disappeared From image of the self I saw, of beauty and poetry, I had neither I think in one language and speak with another A heavy mother tongue doesn’t help my English either Laden with iambic, rhythm and rhyme, why should I bother? I just want to say as it is, in the great hall of fame And the echoes of truth will carry my name
— t. reflexion, Jul 18, 2008
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pinksheep
17 years 11 months ago
Some
Kailashana
17 years 11 months ago
The heart beats in every
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
Beautiful poem. It is ripe
pinksheep
17 years 10 months ago
May
pinksheep
17 years 10 months ago
May
t. reflexion
17 years 10 months ago
I am not alone
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