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IN THE GREAT HALL

IN THE GREAT HALL   I wandered to the portals of a great hall On the entrance arc, was carved an inscription Depicting courage, fame, noble actions, all A two line axiom of perfection ‘Peak of physical expression is in beauty’ Down the hallway, a revolving reflective door appeared ‘The intellect expresses self in poetic bounty’ And the shadows of misguided self disappeared From image of the self I saw, of beauty and poetry, I had neither I think in one language and speak with another A heavy mother tongue doesn’t help my English either Laden with iambic, rhythm and rhyme, why should I bother? I just want to say as it is, in the great hall of fame And the echoes of truth will carry my name
— t. reflexion, Jul 18, 2008

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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pinksheep

17 years 11 months ago

Some

very good lines here, shows to me that you have a courageous intellect, a refined voice-My Regards
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

The heart beats in every

The heart beats in every breast. Love's rhythm has no rhyme or reason, nor words to describe, poets HA! you are all useless! better that you pick the sun's flowers in the shade of reason. Peace. Light. Love. Anna
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pinksheep

17 years 10 months ago

May

I say it is a wonderful word you have used ripe, if I may comment on a comment- My sincerest regards once more T Reflexion and Candlewitch from Pinksheep.
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pinksheep

17 years 10 months ago

May

I say I like the 'better you pick the sun's flowers in the shade of reason'
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 10 months ago

I am not alone

It is really nice to read from you and encouraging too. Now I know that I am not alone 'In The Great Hall'. Thank you all for your time T. Reflexion

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