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Jul 27, 2008
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So Beats the Heart
So Beats the Heart
Let’s all raise a glass to Peggy,
and drink a toast to Mrs. Mack.
Let’s raise our glasses towards the heavens,
because you know she’s toasting back.
She’s been tipping all the guardian angels,
to make sure they're watching over you.
If her breaths were as effortless as her kindness,
she’d still be sitting here with you.
When you laugh and gather friends together,
it pays tribute to the spirit of her life.
The days and years surely go on forever,
so beats the heart of Gram, Mom and Wife.
So let’s all raise a glass to Peggy,
and drink a toast to Mrs. Mack.
Let’s raise our glasses towards the heavens,
because we all know
she’s toasting back.
— tbeaudet, Jul 27, 2008
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Kieran Nelson
17 years 10 months ago
Really nice
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Tom
tbeaudet
17 years 10 months ago
OOPS
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