Morning Conversation with My Wife

"How are you?"
"Well."
"Deep or shallow?"
"Deep. Very deep."

"Wet or dry?"
"Wet."
"Warm or cool?"
"Very warm."

"Gurgling or still?"
"Still."
"Waiting? or resting?"
"Waiting."

"I'm being playful."
"I'm serious."

— barbsdad2003, Jul 28, 2008

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infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

nice, Chuck!

Wish my AM dialogue was as in depth as that. "how was work?" "sucked" "you hungry?" "yep" LMAO!!! At least you get more than a word out of yours! ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "The toilets at a local police station have been stolen. Police say they have nothing to go on..." - Ronnie Barker

Candlewitch

17 years 10 months ago

LOL

In the morning I can barely speak, and he only grunts. Needless to say we don't have many arguments in the morning. I really like this poem as it is both sweet and clever. Always, Cat

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