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Aug 01, 2008
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BIRDSONG
I was not asleep
yet not awake
In that blissful state
I was granted a rare glimpse
Into the very real world
Of make believe
Fairies with gossamer wings
Were dancing upon the golden rays
Of the early morning sunshine
Birds soaring up above
Were singing, and as each perfect note
Escaped their throats
It would turn into a beautiful flower
And slowly float its way down
Into a net of gold and silver threads
That glistened with the early morning dew
I was not awake
yet not asleep
— Linda Moses, Aug 01, 2008
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Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Wondermous
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you
poewriter58
17 years 10 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
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Chrys
themoonman
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Linda...
Linda Moses
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Capitols
yenti
17 years 10 months ago
birdsong
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
True
poewriter58
17 years 10 months ago
linda
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Linda...
Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
nice write
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
thank you
yenti
17 years 10 months ago
The Fairies
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Okay, you did it now
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Wow
Janice Pearce
17 years 10 months ago
BIRDSONG
Linda Moses
17 years 10 months ago
Janice
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