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Aug 06, 2008
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last night I heard ...
last night ...
I heard you tell me
something
that I could not/
would not
hear
---------
just now ...
from across
a jam-packed room,
I see your smile and ...
your moving red
of lip
pointed right at me
that say a thing---
I know not what---
that I like
I heard you tell me
something
that I could not/
would not
hear
---------
just now ...
from across
a jam-packed room,
I see your smile and ...
your moving red
of lip
pointed right at me
that say a thing---
I know not what---
that I like
— barbsdad2003, Aug 06, 2008
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weirdelf
17 years 10 months ago
Wow! This is very different for you Chuck
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
Thanx, Jess
Nilmini
17 years 6 months ago
I like this
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