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Aug 11, 2008
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the jerry-built house
the jerry-built house
---------
half the fun
of nearly everything,
you know,
is thinking about it
beforehand,
or afterward
[... or sometimes
even in between]
---Garis
---------
it was,
it was the house
that jerry built
the house much made of
jerry's tent of quilt
over swamp-filled
ground astilt
the house when wind
would blow would tilt
it was,
it was the house
that jerry built ...
— barbsdad2003, Aug 11, 2008
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infinite_dwarf
17 years 10 months ago
lol
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
This piece ...
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Enjoyed this
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
You got it right with ...
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Chuck...
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
Hie there, Richard ...
rider68
17 years 10 months ago
Hi Chuck
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
Thanx, Peter
RSScheerer
17 years 10 months ago
Memories of childhood forts
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
Ah! Sweet ...
Mark
17 years 10 months ago
I once said "I will jerry-rig it
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
I'm grinningly ...
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 10 months ago
Wow learn some stuff today
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