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Aug 21, 2008
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A Tale of Hatred, The Spirit Son
Oh great spirit, Father of all
I speak to you now
heed my call.
Born of your discarded thoughts
your wasteful joy I do despise
I vow to be the alternative to your lies.
My father love, why?
why do you waste all of your time
on humanity, and their happiness?
"I hate those weak piles of flesh"
For every broken heart that you mend
I will enter the mind of a suicidal kid
and whisper "Do it."
and for every mother you console
I will convince two "you can't take this anymore"
and whisper, "do it!"
Churches fill up once a week
to kneel and pray to you I think
what fools they are, and you, King of fools.
One day of remorse, and six to stay the course
"I like my odds."
Tales are told of your love
a message better off left unspoken
'cause I am Hatred your spirit son...
I come to the lonely as an alcoholic drink
sometimes I lure kids as a catholic priest
I am the voice of reason when all reason is gone.
I am Hatred, the spirit son
kneel to your god and let's have some fun.
I speak to you now
heed my call.
Born of your discarded thoughts
your wasteful joy I do despise
I vow to be the alternative to your lies.
My father love, why?
why do you waste all of your time
on humanity, and their happiness?
"I hate those weak piles of flesh"
For every broken heart that you mend
I will enter the mind of a suicidal kid
and whisper "Do it."
and for every mother you console
I will convince two "you can't take this anymore"
and whisper, "do it!"
Churches fill up once a week
to kneel and pray to you I think
what fools they are, and you, King of fools.
One day of remorse, and six to stay the course
"I like my odds."
Tales are told of your love
a message better off left unspoken
'cause I am Hatred your spirit son...
I come to the lonely as an alcoholic drink
sometimes I lure kids as a catholic priest
I am the voice of reason when all reason is gone.
I am Hatred, the spirit son
kneel to your god and let's have some fun.
— DarkinAZ, Aug 21, 2008
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Rett
17 years 9 months ago
AWESOME
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Rett
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
*I am Hatred, the spirit
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Anna...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
Mark
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Jess...
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Good write
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you friend!
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Dmmit, this is the
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks bro...
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Mark...
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
I am the most beautiful and beloved of god's angels
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Jess...
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
thanks Mark
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
Were not for Judas, would
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
teehee
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Congrat Mark
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
that's not drool,
Janice Pearce
17 years 9 months ago
Mark
Life90 E.A.S.
17 years 9 months ago
I agree!
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you all ...
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
sweet!
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you very much!
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
I knew I was good for something!
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Mark
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
No,
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
… You’re BAD to the
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
rofl
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Still feels good
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you all!
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
This is
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Linda...
sophie kant
17 years 9 months ago
awesome:)
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
yes,
blistered-pen
17 years 9 months ago
beautiful
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you very much!
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