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Darya
Aug 23, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tell Me

Is it love that you feel
When you think of me?
Is it love that you feel
When you write to me?

When you sing to me
When you kiss and seal my lips
When you touch and send me chills
Is it love that you feel?

You know darling
You are to me
The sweetest pain
The sweetest blues, hurts and aches
You are the sweetest sorrow that I have ever felt
Whether it is love or not
I can not tell


aka Darya
— Darya, Aug 23, 2008
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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 9 months ago

It was only a fantasy,

It was only a fantasy, love can never speak in the Silence we seek, we are lonely folds of flesh, aching to be touched, weeping divisions of a solitary image burning in our hearts ~~Anna
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 2 months ago

love is a verb which the

love is a verb which the subject and the object know themseves without extra confirmation. very romantic. shan
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Darya

17 years 1 month ago

thanks shawn for your

thanks shawn for your comments ...I have not been visiting this site much lately ....i am so sorry for my late reply .....i really enjoy your poetry darya

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