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The Power In A People

 Martin had a dream, I AM THE DREAM.

I can read, write, dance ,sing, play and pray.
 
I can open my mouth to tell a joke.

Oh, hell I can even vote.

I can sit where I please when I board the bus while I listen to young
children speak of black history being taught throughout their history books.

I can see an african american  man run for the seat of president with a 
caucasian woman being his worthy opponent.

We have come so far as a people. We really know how to represent as we contiue
to exemplify strength greatness in our every step.

 

 

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TOWANA HODGES ©2008

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— towana, Aug 26, 2008

Critiques

yenti

yenti

17 years 9 months ago

Power

A little shout I hear of right and wrong, the journey we are taking is a very long one, it is not how we start the journey that matters, it is how we travel and what we are to those we meet each day. Nicely put in your words, I can only hope that the same journies end, is a vision we can all have with a great love for what we are, Yours, Yenti
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towana

17 years 8 months ago

Thank You

Thank You for your comment.
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sophie kant

17 years 9 months ago

inspiring :)

In the Philippines we have Rizal. Like Mr. King he also wanted equality for the Filipinos (in our own country!) I still believe that his dream can come true, like where you guys are now. The power is in us, we just have to take responsibility for it. Really enjoyed your poem:) peace, Sophie~
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towana

17 years 8 months ago

Thank You

I am glad you enjoyed reading it cause I enjoyed writing it. Keep the Faith and stay strong! Peace: Towana
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 9 months ago

nice write

Smiles:) Barbara Staying true to self is a must as, well as overcoming barriers you exxpress so well here, as we run this race of life.
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towana

17 years 8 months ago

Thank You

Thank You for your comment. Check out my poetry site freewebs.com/poet4hire i have other poems posted there.

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