When God Whispers

when storms subside

emptiness is born for the

descent of wisdom

— leonard daranjo, Sep 10, 2008

Critiques

t. reflexion

17 years 9 months ago

Proverbial...

Leonard The poet rides with riddles and In few words of three lines The emptiness in my head is filled up With flakes of Divine wisdom... Well done and best wishes. T.

leonard daranjo

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks T

I deeply appreciate your stopping to read and comment. All the best ... Leonard

Janice Pearce

17 years 9 months ago

Wheb God Whispers

Beautiful one here Leonard! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

leonard daranjo

17 years 9 months ago

Hi Janice

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Cheers ... Leonard

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