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leonard daranjo

Sep 16, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

At The Altar of Progress- Maple Leaf Blues

a loon looks down on

a deserted inukshuk

and tortured landscape

— leonard daranjo, Sep 16, 2008

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17 years 9 months ago

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beautiful.

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Thanks a million

Your one word says a lot. Appreciate your stopping by. Cheers ... Leonard

17 years 8 months ago

yes. beautiful. the cry of

yes. beautiful. the cry of the loon is one of the loneliest, haunting sounds every heard. ~A

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Thanks Anna

Agree with you about the Loon's cry. Kind regards ... Leonard

17 years 8 months ago

Hi Leonard...

I love the poem, it could be literal or descriptive.. in either case a lonely scene... the title.. is that a double title , just wondering? loved this one..! Richard

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Thank you Richard

I am really happy that you loved the poem. Yes it is a double title - the second part was mentioned as an after thought with a view to throw some more light on the poem. Thanks again ... Leonard

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