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Sep 19, 2008
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threshold:
You feed me midnight tears
your cool maiden cheek
rapture of a happy nebulae
the smudge above
the sky
the wind pours from your
portion of soul
lake dances with fire
the far away shores
full of content warm homes
your teeth glint polished
pointed
eager
a siren races through thick
buildings
screaming
grey cold blacktop
skins like mysteries
we touch where words
fail
where tatoos
needles stabbed us
the bridge of pain
where love tore
through
trepidation
the runaway horse
flames sparking
metal shoes
thundering alone
empty under
the weight of
dreams
what has leapt out
from you
has left
sleep deep
in thresholds
dark
i watch the limbs
of trees conducting
silent symphonies
— orgami, Sep 19, 2008
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Critiques
rider68
17 years 8 months ago
Hi O~
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
a dreamy write...
Janice Pearce
17 years 8 months ago
~O
Calliope
17 years 8 months ago
Breathtaking!
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 8 months ago
Threshold
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
congrats on the spotlight
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Dreaming
RSScheerer
17 years 8 months ago
O
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
O
W.C.Wampler
17 years 8 months ago
Your poetic style in Threshold
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Steven
orgami
17 years 8 months ago
Sundays falling sun
Kevin P. Bodisch
17 years 8 months ago
Great Write
purplemoondoll
17 years 8 months ago
skins like mysteries we
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
Everyone else has said it, my friend, another milestone write
orgami
17 years 8 months ago
orgami
DDCdogood
17 years 8 months ago
My Stay at The 'Threshold'
Marius Surleac
17 years 8 months ago
niceeee
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
Orgami,
orgami
17 years 3 months ago
sleep deep the thresholds gate the time to shift not hesitate
W.C.Wampler
17 years 3 months ago
threshold's gate poetic comment reply
orgami
16 years 7 months ago
One of the few Rhyming comment poems W.C.
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