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Vignettes (i) Associations (ii) Burning Bush

 i

 

on fragrant winds

memories are wafted in

from the attic

 

ii

 

woods are alight with

sacrificial fire 

an earth offering



— leonard daranjo, Sep 26, 2008

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poewriter58

17 years 7 months ago

leonard

All I can say to these is very nicely done Chrys

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