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Oct 02, 2008
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at te bottom of the deepest sea
when youre beneath the botomless sea,
you need not fear the storm at the top
for lower the tempest is tranquilled of sorrow
but at the top the sailor is being tossed,
by the strong current of the waves,
that he never sees peace anymore
lower here, though is indepth to woes,
and tragedy inflicted by the blackest demon
to turn things on their distorted heads
but the peace i feel ,though the sedation of sorrow
is more assuring to stare peril in the eye
and smile,for you're sitting far lower than it,
having seen the worst of this world
— emeka ozurumba, Oct 02, 2008
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Barbara Writes
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Brutal world
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