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Oct 02, 2008
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Pulsation
Pulsation
Rumbling, pounding,
shaking, sounding,
Rushing, roaring,
emotions soaring,
Screaming, dreaming,
stomach squeaming,
Shaking, quaking,
pulse is racing,
Leaping, squeaking,
no time for speaking,
Dashing, daring,
extremely scaring,
Churning, turning,
muscles burning,
Ride the roller coaster!
Rumbling, pounding,
shaking, sounding,
Rushing, roaring,
emotions soaring,
Screaming, dreaming,
stomach squeaming,
Shaking, quaking,
pulse is racing,
Leaping, squeaking,
no time for speaking,
Dashing, daring,
extremely scaring,
Churning, turning,
muscles burning,
Ride the roller coaster!
— Rett, Oct 02, 2008
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Critiques
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Damn Rett,
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Thank you
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
…and that’s just the
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
*LOL*
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Ooooo, my belly.....
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Nutcase
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Aww c'mon now...
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
*LOL* nutcase
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Heard of all of them, esp. BASF and DOW
W.C.Wampler
17 years 8 months ago
poem Pusation
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
You're welcome sir
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Stomach squeamish now lol
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Why thank you ma'am
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
The academics will tell you
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
*LOL* Elf
orgami
17 years 8 months ago
Wooden coaster
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
The wooden coasters are the best to me
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
*LOL* I love roller coasters
Race_9togo
17 years 2 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
Bummer Jim
orgami
17 years 2 months ago
here I am again
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