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Oct 04, 2008
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HELL
He quickly walked down the halls
of the firey hell
His large black wings spread wide
Casting a terrible shadow on the walls
The lesser demons shrinking back in fear
As the Powerful One passed by
His howls and shrieks echoed to the pit
Of the dark and fearful deep abyss
He had been summoned by his master
For he had failed to complete his mission
To bring in one special soul
And to bring it in alive
Satan sat with face twisted in an evil rage
His long black claws gripping the arms
Of his stoney throne
The Powerful One entered the
Room of Satan's throne
Dropping to the floor
Now crawling on all fours
"Master", he hissed, through clenched teeth
"Silence!" Satan shrieked
"I have waited long enough! "Must I ask
another to complete this simple task
"There is one, a special one, you know
Of whom I speak
I want her for my bride
I will no longer be denied
"But master", the Powerful One said
"They say that she is blessed
And her heart cannot by evil be possessed
"You will bring her here to me, Satan growled
"I will wait no more
You have but one more night to
Make your failure right
"But I warn you, if you fail me
now as you did before
I will surely show you
What hell is really for
of the firey hell
His large black wings spread wide
Casting a terrible shadow on the walls
The lesser demons shrinking back in fear
As the Powerful One passed by
His howls and shrieks echoed to the pit
Of the dark and fearful deep abyss
He had been summoned by his master
For he had failed to complete his mission
To bring in one special soul
And to bring it in alive
Satan sat with face twisted in an evil rage
His long black claws gripping the arms
Of his stoney throne
The Powerful One entered the
Room of Satan's throne
Dropping to the floor
Now crawling on all fours
"Master", he hissed, through clenched teeth
"Silence!" Satan shrieked
"I have waited long enough! "Must I ask
another to complete this simple task
"There is one, a special one, you know
Of whom I speak
I want her for my bride
I will no longer be denied
"But master", the Powerful One said
"They say that she is blessed
And her heart cannot by evil be possessed
"You will bring her here to me, Satan growled
"I will wait no more
You have but one more night to
Make your failure right
"But I warn you, if you fail me
now as you did before
I will surely show you
What hell is really for
— Linda Moses, Oct 04, 2008
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Critiques
W.C.Wampler
17 years 8 months ago
poem; Hell
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
W.C.
Mark
17 years 8 months ago
Satans
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Hi, Mark
t. reflexion
17 years 8 months ago
Who else...?
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
T
yenti
17 years 8 months ago
A Hell
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Hi, Ian
panaella
17 years 8 months ago
I want to know more
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
HI, Ellie
poewriter58
17 years 8 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Chrys.
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Jess
leonard daranjo
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Leonard
easylife_2
17 years 8 months ago
Agree with everybody
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Easy
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Good write Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Rett
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Linda,
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
Evil fight Good (as in all stories) or TV
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Thank
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