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leonard daranjo

Oct 04, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tectonic Tremors

responses scamper

on dragonfly legs across

my distracted mind

— leonard daranjo, Oct 04, 2008

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easylife_2

17 years 8 months ago

A catchy title

You have here.Enjoyed reading.Thank you.

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Thanks a million

Glad that you enjoyed it and for the comment. Leonard

17 years 8 months ago

leonard

This is good writing. "distracted mind" I can relate to

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Thank you Linda

For reading and commenting. Leonard

17 years 8 months ago

Again...

your short poem lingers long inside of me after reading. You are a master of few words pregnant with meanings. Well done. T.

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Thank you T

Thank you for your appreciation. It is most encouraging. Leonard

17 years 8 months ago

Leonard

This form is called switching, right? I loved it! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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leonard daranjo

17 years 8 months ago

Than you Janice

Its always a pleasure. Leonard

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