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Agony of a Poet

A poet sits,
pen in hand.
As the paper waits.

Torn by the rhythm
and the rhyme.
So to the dictionary.
For some inspiration.

Assistance to create
new words.,
Such frustration.

Tormented by technology,
as it fails to respond.
To be put right.

Anger and fire.
A passion burns.
Ignited into flames.

As you read,
more words, creep in
between the lines.
Making it able.

You come to a stop,.ugh!
It only takes one word.
But, it has to be the right word.
So it can flow,
to gain momentum.

The sighs and woe's.
Putting pen to paper.
Facing this foe,
I must not waiver

Lost in thought.
he reads again.
The lines of his poem.

A cup of coffee
to inspire.
Fingers to the keyboard,
start to write.

The thinking process.
A shot in the dark.
He looks, he looks,
but turns back
to the open page.
from the start.

Will I, won't I?
questions, as he ponders.
Over his every
slaved word.

He has something to say.
To be heard by all.
The creative spark,
To make it's mark.

He stares into
the page written.
A change here,
A change there,
But, something is missing?

So he reads it
over and over.
His mind racing.
If only.
he can discover.
The phrase,
the right pacing.

So he reads again
Clutching words,
out of thin air.
Words leap into his mind.
Will they be fair?

The thinker he is,
chin rests on hand,
elbow on knee.
A true picture of
The Original Thinker.

So lost in thought
his mind races.
For the right phrase
To take shape.
Each word is,
in its right place.

The agony,
of being a poet.
— Electric Blue, Oct 04, 2008

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 8 months ago

Hi Maggie...

this describes my writing process, except sometimes it just flows out, I have no more control than when it doesn't.. very real images given here! Richard
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 8 months ago

Agony of a poet

Hi richard Yes we can all relate. I see others really struggle trying to find words and make it fit. But as for me, it just flows no planning it just happens. But with observing others and see how they create i am looking differently on how i do my poetry too. thanks for the comments electricblue
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 8 months ago

Maggie

I love the imagery of this poem. As for me I just carry a pen and paper, because I never know what will spark a poem in my travels, a look, a phrase, a train ride. I just can't sit in front of a screen. I like doing it the old way. thanks, Eddie
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 8 months ago

Agony of a poet.

Hello Eddie Me too, I always carry several pads and pens as i write everyday. I never know what i will write. Then transfer what i have written to the computer. I do not intend or plan to write. It just happens from anywhere any inspiration. A thought, a word, a sound, a vision. For me it just flows until it is finished. Then i read what i have written. But observings others as in my poem who find a theme. Get a few sentences and then try to make it grow by rhyming re arranging the words. Sometimes it is so painful. As it can take days or weeks etc. Then anguish appears, but out of the anger, grasping words out of the air or from a dictionary. It can finally become the wonder we create. Thank you for sharing. I have shoe boxes full of writings etc. I always carry about six pads one a daily journel and a dozen pens and a few pencils etc so that i can sketch too. Thank you for sharing my friend Maybe you can look at Darkness of Night and Earthbound Spirit I have written these after reading poems on site and have dedicated it to the poet who inspired me to write them. maggie Electricblue
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 8 months ago

So true...

Sometime the waste paper basket is full, the struggle of a crippled writer and sometime, before you say Jack Robinson, a poem is created. It shows that inspiration can be inhibited by lack of words and words can as well inspire. I relate with this. Well done. T.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 8 months ago

Agony of a poet

Hello T Totally understood my friend. We all work differently. So i have never had a waste pater basket of trying. With me i get an idea, a look, a smell, a vision, a sound. I never know what i am going to write i start then i finish. For me it just flows. But i have been observing the poetry on site and see how others struggle. The get a few words, a few lines and then try to extend them by various means. Searching the dictionaries. Looking deep iinside or just clutching at words that appear out of thin air. Over time days weeks sometimes and it comes to the wonder we create. Maybe you can look at Earthboud Spirit, Darkness of Night which i have dedicated to other poets on site because when i read their poetry it inspired me to write these. This is to us all my friend. To support and inspire each other maggie Electricblue
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

electricblue

Oh boy, did I feel this one! A poets life eh? "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 7 months ago

Agony of a Poet

hello Janice Thank you for your comments I am sure many can relate to this. But it has made me aware of how hard it is for some to create their magic - I am looking and study others so I can create more wonders.
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 7 months ago

Agony

We've all been there. The dictionary is great; blindly open and choose a word, write a poem about it. Forces you to think over the block. You have a few rough spots in this piece, but they fit with the theme of struggling to get the words out. Definitely struck a nerve with every poet and writer! ~ Ronda
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Electricblue

Agony of a poet is a good write. We all experience this at some point in life I think. I certainly have had my share of poet block. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

poet's agony

E.B., I found and read this one just now. I can see the scene in my head. I've been there many times, and I love it. When my whole world comes down to a work of art I'm living in, and trying to get right, trying to make real for other people, trying to test my principles of truth, I feel alive. I feel I'm doing what I must do. A very powerful poem E.B. Thanks wcw
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Agony of being a poet

WC I knew you would be able to relate to this poem. I to want to be in this space of living my art to the full. Trying to get it right. I feel alive in this space, so energised. Doing what i have to do, love to do. I am driven by means unknown. Electricblue
Z

zarul

17 years 6 months ago

HI

NICE WORK, my poet fren. ZARUL
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 5 months ago

Ok electricblue

I just read "agony of a poet", and the only question I have is this: Just exactly when was it that you got inside MY HEAD? heehee an excellent poem, my blue electric friend. Respectfully, Jim "An armed populace is the last defense against tyrannical government": Race
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 3 months ago

Agony of a poet

Jim I think we can all relate to this my friend. What we poets artists struggle go through to get to where we want to go Others do not always know the pain we suffer for our art Thank you for sharing Electric Blue
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Ink Dragon

17 years 3 months ago

Maggie,

this is wonderful! Like Ronda, I stumbled on a few rough patches (especially punctuation), but the more I read, the more I liked the roughness. I agree with Ronda that it fits your theme. Yours, ~Nina
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 3 months ago

Agony of a poet

Nina Thank you my friend. I observe others on how they try to create their wonders and see the struggle and pain. Where as for me I just stream and cannot really understand why they have this struggle to find the right word? Electric Blue

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