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rahbar
Oct 05, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sweet Sparrow.

Sweet Sparrow

Come and console me O sweet sparrow
take away a little of my sorrow.

While you fly covering the lofty skies
I brood in my room small and narrow.

You jump around without worry from tree to tree
I am confined here in my fear of tomorrow.

You chirp along happily on your ways of life
could I just throw my burdens and follow.

You look so full of life and full of every thing
a little of that attitude let me borrow.

By:-
Rahbar.

 


 

— rahbar, Oct 05, 2008

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yenti

yenti

17 years 8 months ago

Little Sparrow

Lovely to read and a gentle view on these little birds that brighten up our views from many places, Thanks, Yours Ian.T
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rahbar

17 years 8 months ago

Inspiring Birds.

Hello Ian.T...I have always been attracted to wards sparrows...since early childhood...their constant activity has always amazed me no end...I am a part time bird watcher...thanks for your comment. Rahbar.
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 8 months ago

"let me borrow"

feeling of fear to face the new day is a curse that only human have. The other creature live on instinct, but those feelings are the power of life that only we get to write about. well done, Rahbar! thanks, Eddie 'do as the once barren tree: flourish, and like the planted seed: rise" Jose de Diego
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rahbar

17 years 8 months ago

Inspiration.

Hello Eddie...there is so much in this world which inspires and teaches us...man has always learned and evolved by just watching nature...just like a seed... a moment of thought..too.. grows into a poem or something else....thanks for your inspiring comment. Rahbar.
Rett

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

Ah, to throw our troubles

away and be free as a bird. Well done Rahbar. A wistful look at life. Respectfully, Rett: "We can all be thankful that Picasso wasn't a plastic surgeon." Rett
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rahbar

17 years 8 months ago

Thank you Rett.

"yeah..Picasso was dealing with deepest part of heart and soul.not the superficial skin" we are thankful indeed. Your comments are most welcome. ...thanks. Rahbar.

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