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leonard daranjo
Oct 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

journey of self discovery

 every man is uniquely fashioned

it is within his power to

reveal his identity

by self discovery

though understanding

of his nature

which god has

given

him

 

 


— leonard daranjo, Oct 13, 2008
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rider68

17 years 8 months ago

Hi Leonard

A very thoughtful written piece, to self analyze, to question, and to stand back and take a hard look at who and what we are and stand for, a great deliverey, To change.?...nothing to improve........It's perfect, Be well Leonard....very best regards Peter ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 8 months ago

sorry but I was left thinking

yes, and...? though through? italics don't work well on screen, sorry again, wish I could be more positive, especially seeing all the great feedback you have been giving, but this just doesn't strike any sparks in me. Blame me. cheers, Jess
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Leonard

A beauty lies here, before my eyes! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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