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leonard daranjo
Oct 14, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Buried Treasures

 burning inner eye

sets candle aflame in the 

soul's darkest corners 

 


— leonard daranjo, Oct 14, 2008
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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Leonard

Spot on here, Leonard! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 8 months ago

Leonard

YOu have created a picture in 3 short lines. very well done. I find these Japanese poems harder to write that the longer freeform
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 8 months ago

Leonard

It is said that the eyes are the window to the soul. Therefore, if you look hard enough, you can cast away the shadows, and see someone for who they really are. Nice write! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"It is better to be thought of a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt..." - Mark Twain

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