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leonard daranjo
Oct 17, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Life is Theatre (Tanka)

 time unfolds its palm:

stage for pilgrim performers

trapped in life’s embrace

birth is the cue for entrance

death is the cue for exit

 

 


— leonard daranjo, Oct 17, 2008
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Very nice

I admire the ability to write these types of poems. Nice. Patty
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rider68

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Leonard

Yet again....few words, and yet it entice's the the reader to think, your words are chosen well.....and complete. very best regards... Peter ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~

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