3 Early Morning Poems of 10/17/08

Suddenly

The night opens
his wings and flies
away...

suddenly, the silence.

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When Shadows Leave

When shadows leave
what stands in the way of the sun?

I am that shadow.
I am that sun.

I am that question undone.

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The Painting Melts

Today I saw a painting
melt
into the sea
and stars fell
like waterdrops
Rumi kissed me
with sunflower hands,
Van Gogh broke into prayer

— Kailashana, Oct 17, 2008

Critiques

RSScheerer

17 years 7 months ago

Simple beauty

Quiet and contemplative with beautiful images. Nice to read you again, Anna. ~ Ronda

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

I’ve missed youh

I've missed youh Ronda... Welcome back! Love. ~A

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

Something I needed

my angry inner teenager has been out of control lately, you soothe his shattered beliefs. cheers, Jess

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

Jey Hess, unification

Jey Hess, unification happens, not to worry. ;-) Love. ~A

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you D… revisiting it

Thank you D... revisiting it offered me an opportunity to make one last *correction*. Love. ~A

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

~A

Loved these Anna! Peaceful,thought provoking,and dusted with beauty~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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