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Nocturnal Falls

Dazzling drip droplets drizzle down
And I feel playful

Silky starlight sews sinuous strands softly
And I feel magical

Black billows boast beautifully blended blooms
And I’m swept away

— theladyblue, Oct 19, 2008

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poewriter58

17 years 7 months ago

Excellent

alliteration in this poem nice work nicely descriptive Chrys
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Ladyblue...

night ponderings... well placed imaging... yes, Chrys is right... a lovely piece... Richard

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