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I like this, but I do not like how's it's written. not the format or anything.. but all the misspelled words. makes it hard to read for me, to appreciate what it is when I'm trying to translate what you meant to spell. it is very nice, I'd just like to see you fix up the spelling. :) p.s. unless it was intentional? if it was, I don't get it really..

Looking outside I can see how it came to you. I look at the trees and get inspired also, I wrote many poem about nature. Not sure of your meaning, but I see trees as people when one crash those around them fall also. As you know people are different in their own beautiful way, we just need to get to know the person behind the obvious. I guess when we *cry the leaves of autumn* its because the leaves and trees start to die in autumn. In a sense people can be like leaves and trees in death, but friends and neighbors can be there for people in their time of autumn. As I said, not sure of your meaning, but this is what I felt in this piece. Correct your grammatical errors it hides the beauty of your poem and this will be a great piece. Look forward to more of writing. Welcome to Neopoet your poem is a great start to being a good poet. There are many fine poets here willing to help you achieve that goal. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

I am not sure, but i think tree's should be trees as in more than one tree. Just a thought as this keep jumping out at me. The changes has really made a difference. It is a beautiful write. Happy you appreciate the the fine suggestion given. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

like your poem very much... its clarity and brevity... (didn't see it when it was unspellchecked... notice how words are highlighted, underlined in red when a word is misspelled here... or post it to Micro Word & do a spellcheck,, there are modern conveniences available on the net.. ;-) ~A

I like your poem and look forward to reading more of them Leonard

But your last line really closed up well. Never really thought of trees crying off their leaves, but there you go! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"So you stand on the corner in your new English clothes, and you look so polished from your hair down to your toes. Ah, but still your finger's gonna pick your nose after all." - Billy Joel

This is beautiful and I love it. You have done a good job here. Now, with the exception of two things it is perfect. "but when one crash the other fall".....Maybe..."but when one crashes the other falls" or maybe..."but when one crashes the others fall"..Just a suggestion. Looking forward to more. Don't get too worried about your spelling because even the best of the people here make mistakes once in a while. Well done. Respectfully, Rett: "Does this election remind you of The Emperors New Clothes? No one has the guts to tell him because..." Rett