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leonard daranjo
Oct 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Acrostic Poem: The Painful Truth

 Did it ever occur to you that, with

Every breath you take you are marching

Away from your  beginnings

Towards an end that most people

Hate to acknowledge

 



— leonard daranjo, Oct 25, 2008
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

wow

wow thats really pretty it makes me think..i really enjoyed how you continued a statment though all the letters Tessadiana<3 p.s. i beleive your brother is my religion teacher
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poewriter58

17 years 7 months ago

leonard

A traditional acrostic will use the title of the poem well done of the title were death Chrys
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leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Chrys

For stopping by. I have given it a title just to be a little different. Leonard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 7 months ago

Leonard...

why yes it had occurred to me, a long time ago in fact... loved your truth poem.... traditional acrostic... maybe not... but your title adds flavor and meaning to your poem... I love the way you write... your friend Richard
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leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Richard

Your appreciation of my work really means a lot to me. thanks a million for your most encouraging comment. Yours friend Leonard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Leonard

~~~~I enjoyed this one~~~~ Thanks for posting! ~~~~~~~~~~~Wanda Sykes For President~~~~~~~~

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