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spirals

my life spirals
it spirals down wards
into the darkest feelings my life has ever endured
just to feel the high of starting all over again
 just  to feel the beginning moments I used to feel
when I could truly say I felt alive
but now my life spirals
and it always spirals
downwards
— Tessadiana, Oct 25, 2008

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poewriter58

17 years 7 months ago

tessa

although somber this is well written . It describes how you feel inside Chrys

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