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Oct 27, 2008
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an unforgettable sunset
jagged streaks of light
splinter eastern sky into
volcanic fissures
— leonard daranjo, Oct 27, 2008
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weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
yeah, and?
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Where is humanity?
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Well put, thanks for food for thought
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
You are welcome Jess
Tessadiana
17 years 7 months ago
hhmmm
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you Tessadiana
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
Leonard
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Janice
Mark
17 years 7 months ago
I like it !
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you mark
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Actually...
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Jess
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