my love and I

Come with me, my love Show me the waySee the signs aboveIt says live life todayTake a risk, my dearPut your hand on my waistNo there’s nothing to fearNot in this placeShow some pride, my angelI’m choosing youTo hold me at this angleWhat dance shall we do?Stop being foolish, my HonNo music we needLet the earth sing and hum To dance is my plead

— Tessadiana, Oct 27, 2008

Critiques

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Tessa

One slight correction (unless your boy is a follower of Attila) Hun -> Hon. Other than that, quite a good write. You've proved to be most fascinating. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"When there's no good answers, and no new questions. Another personal disaster, there's nowhere to go but down..." - Gin Blossoms

Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thank you ....

im so glad i corrected that thank you for the comments Tessadiana<3

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Tess,

Love is all a beautiful dance when two are joined. When one has fear the other compensates, and leads the one into the ever burning passion that is love! nicely written, I enjoy the celestial imagery of the dance. I want to see the dark side of the love you mentioned in the chat room. show me that dark passion of love!! thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose de Deigo

Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago