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Winter Chronicles

 The journey is about change
Its not about what or who you were
Its about what or who you are 

Leonard 


trees weep stalactites 

condemned to stark nakedness

the moon’s chilling gaze

 


— leonard daranjo, Oct 28, 2008

Critiques

themoonman

themoonman

17 years 7 months ago

Leonard...

I so much enjoy your Haiku... well written and full of imagery... the first one is wise and true and I can see the icicles hanging in the light of the moons background... much like a painting... a still shot.... Richard

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