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Oct 30, 2008
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asylum
i am in an asylum in the middle of the town
where my life is an acid trip that will never let me down
i remeber the first time i came to this place
and when i do this fear is seen on my face
i knew i belonged here was'nt that hard to see
but that doesnt change how i want to set free
whats hard is the telling between mind and reality
but fear is the worst when they show brutality
but now i just live here, and that is hard to face
when you have to lie and show you dont belong in this place
where my life is an acid trip that will never let me down
i remeber the first time i came to this place
and when i do this fear is seen on my face
i knew i belonged here was'nt that hard to see
but that doesnt change how i want to set free
whats hard is the telling between mind and reality
but fear is the worst when they show brutality
but now i just live here, and that is hard to face
when you have to lie and show you dont belong in this place
— Tessadiana, Oct 30, 2008
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zarul
17 years 7 months ago
hi diana
Tessadiana
17 years 7 months ago
hey
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
asylum
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Tess,
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