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what is love?

love is a taste ,feel ,sight and sound
it taste like a chocolate more richer than found

just like a symphony that's only played in heaven
just like a sight that's higher than cloud eleven

but most of all its a feeling which only few of us know
but when you get it you cant help but show
— Tessadiana, Oct 31, 2008

Critiques

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Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 7 months ago

What is Love?

A quite well articulated write. I like the last two lines most. I suggest you replace the word "noise" with the word "symphony", if you like. -Mohammad

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