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Tessadiana
Nov 03, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

spell

 

What spell have you put
all day thinking about you
'Cause now I love you?
 What witchcraft portrayFor making you my hearts will‘cause I dream of you
 What evil took placeWith a human sacrifice ?cause my heart needs you
 what devil whorshipwhat promise have you made nowcause now I am yours
— Tessadiana, Nov 03, 2008
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tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 7 months ago

You asked for "raw truth"

This needs more, it's a great start, but incomplete in my opinion. Looking forward to a fuller revision. Tom
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zarul

17 years 7 months ago

hi

i agree with Tom. i am looking forward for the continual version of this
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

okay how do u liek it

okay how do u liek it now.......this poem about a man never beleiving he fell in love with some one with out even knowing it Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"

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