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Tessadiana
Nov 05, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

fairy tales

I remember a long time ago

Stories even though sad ended with happily ever after

And when you hear the new stories you face is going to show

When your family’s go on a quest for laughter

 

I remember a long time ago

When I thought my mom would last forever

When I never believed my heart would feel like frost and snow

And no feeling is left whatsoever

— Tessadiana, Nov 05, 2008
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Lonnie

17 years 7 months ago

Nicely done, Tess!

This is really a good poem, Tess! It's never easy losing someone special, especially a parent! But cheer up, those Happily Ever Afters will come again!
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thanks

yeah i wrote this for all the teens who lost one or both of there parents thanks again Tessadiana<3
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zarul

17 years 7 months ago

whoa

nice work, my dear friend. i dont have to say much as u portrayed your messages very well in here. excellent. ((( HUG ))) ZARUL
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thanks

thank you fro reading and commenting Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"

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