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Tessadiana
Nov 07, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

prayer to dracula

My count my lord my prince of night

This is my promise this is my creed

To follow you away from the world that is bright

I promise when fight I will have the speed

And my heart will always be hear to bite

— Tessadiana, Nov 07, 2008
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zarul

17 years 7 months ago

nice work, alice

this is so good. though it is short, but the message is well portrayed. nice work, again. SMILE GREAT DAY ZARUL
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

tessa

Couple small suggestions: First, capitalize Dracula in the title. In the first line, if you put some commas between each name, it will flow better. (my count, my lord, my prince of night) Last line, hear -> here. Otherwise, nice work! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"When I was strong, strong in the sound thought I'd see when day was done. Now I'm weaker than the palest blue Oh so weak in this need for you" - Nick Drake
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thanks for ur

thanks for ur sujestions Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thank you and i am glad u

thank you and i am glad u enjoyed this poem Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"

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