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suicide

              Some one          yoU        bullied              Constantly              Infuriating              Death      forevEr
— Tessadiana, Nov 08, 2008

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zarul

17 years 7 months ago

HI aLIce

may i ask though, is this a type of acrostic?
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

yes it is.....

the some what bold letters speel out suicide thank you fro reading,Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"
Mark

Mark

17 years 7 months ago

Tess

True, yes it is. A good poem. A codded acrostic needs a consistant pattern I believe. Like fist letter fist line second letter second line third letter third line etc. Very difficult to do. I am not sure (but may be wrong) if moving the entire line to make the letters in a line bold spell a word but you get points for the go at it for sure. Dont forget on a hidden acrostic you need to give the code. What is the code for this? Man thinks this.
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thnak you all for

thnak you all for reading Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Tess

Was this based on the news story a few months back about the kid who killed themselves because they were bullied? I remember that made pretty big news, and the parents sued. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"When I was strong, strong in the sound thought I'd see when day was done. Now I'm weaker than the palest blue Oh so weak in this need for you" - Nick Drake
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

to tell you the truth i

to tell you the truth i based this on my thoughts from suicide,like a story lol Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"

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