a un justified choice

To me war is not a game ,Is not a placeWere people are tameIt has no grace Is not a show to see who is greaterWho is smarterIt is more like everyone is turning into a haterLooks like people are turning into a martyr To me war is an actTo be fearedto threat an attackbut only a place for blood to be smeared to me war is a stateThis will shade the country a much darker taintand make some families live in hate while there already afraid

— Tessadiana, Nov 11, 2008

Critiques

Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thanks

thank you for reading Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"

whitetea

17 years 7 months ago

war– sucks.its funny to

war-- sucks. its funny to think that so many people die because a few dozen people in government offices makes a few decisions.

Fareeda Moin

17 years 7 months ago

An Unjustified Choice

Bravo!!! What a brave condemnation of war. The poem showes the dark faces of the war mongers. Brilliant, tessadiana. I compliment you on your beautiful write. -Fareeda

Lonnie

17 years 7 months ago

Great job, Tessa!

I knew you had it in you! This poem really shows off the talent you've been keeping a secret! Loved it! Keep 'em coming, Tessa!

Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 7 months ago

Unjustified Choice

Tessadiana, You have painted the ugly face of war in your poem. The poem is heartwrenching. Millions of youg poeople are used as fodder for the guns of wars whose perpetrators sit in comfortable Offices building monuments of fame and glory over the charred bodies of their youth with impunity. You have unveiled this act. Thank you and God Bless you! -Mohammad

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